Sue - FE Collab

She looks really cool, I specially like the color/lighting of the hair and the bow's wood texture though I'd like to give you some advice, if you're okay with it...

Her bust shouldn't be that marked (since she's not wearing anything tight) the most natural thing in this case would be to mark it a little on the center, so to say that it is lifting the clothes a bit. By the way (someone told me this, once): when drawing them, try to imagine two drops falling from her shoulders! it helps a lot, trust me. Also, it seems that you made legs the same height as her arms, but legs are normally the arms length + 1/2 of another one.

By the way you do faces I'm guessing you've been practicing them a lot, but are still starting with bodies? you've already got the technique so I'm sure your drawings will be awesome(r) when you get to dominate more general anatomy ^^